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My first attempt in puppet animation
I followed a tutorial made by "Doble Rainboom" and i algo got the puppet and the background from them. The idea is mine tough. Yeah i know its boring, but hey, it's my first time ;)
It took me like 4 hours for the rough animation, and almost a whole day for the puppet part. Totally worth it for a 2 sec animation, i dont care xD
I really appreciate any critique or advise, so i can get better, so go on, dont be shy :D
BTW, about the apple... Yeah i was lazy xD
Also, sorry about the size, :/ you might have to ctrl+mouse scroll to see it right :(

Edit: I changed a few thing. I added a wing cycle, i added a longer wait for the apple, in addition with a inhale-exale, and blink. I also changed the eyes at the end
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chibipanda95 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well done! I like how you added her breathing. The part where her mouth is on the side looks a bit odd but overall it looks good!
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Fallingstarz5 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Maybe add some shine and color to the apple? It looks very plain and doesn't quite fit in. Also, her wings are animated oddly. The breathing thing doesn't look right as well.
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Xeregon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Suggestions? Well, I'd recommend not having RD breathe visibly through her chest beforehand. In the show, they only really breathe when they're gasping, and even then I think it's mostly through the belly. The motion really draws the eye and there's no real point to it. Other than that, it all looks pretty good. Nice work!
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BB-K Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice, but how damn big is that Flash file? I'm using 1920x1080 resolution and it already went over the edge. :( Could have been smaller to just 720p would do.

Anyway,oops, worm in that apple.
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sirustalcelion Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
The throat feels a bit froggish at the beginning (maybe needed an extra keyframe to make RD look more 'snappy' and the apple doesn't have any mass to it. Good work though!
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wwizzard Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
her knee is a bit lumpy, but it's alot better than i could have done.
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dreamy-drawings Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice!!
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lol:

I have an idea for another animation, if you're interested!
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sure thing :D
I was thinking about doing a walk cycle next, but maybe i can pospose that :)
So, what is it? xD
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sweetie Belle giving Pipsqueak a kiss on the cheek, making him blush.
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hehe i like it, im gonna make sure you are the first one to know if i get to do it ;)
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alright!
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
But dont get any high hopes, couse its easier to me to animate my next animation with characters from the mane six, becuase i only have their "puppets" and is pretty hard to make one, so i dont know when im gonna be able to make an animation using not mane six characters :/
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, then.
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iloveyousonicEXE Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
cool!
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Fairytale5353 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome!! but mabye a bit slower?
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MLP-Black-Knight Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome.
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks ;)
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MLP-Black-Knight Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No Prob.
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BluePawArt Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is very well done but look at the back legs as well as the wing goes missing
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jetrixwolf Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome
good work
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks :)
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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vappletree Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love it! :D bro you gotta teach me xd
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :)
Haha sure thing ;), that way we can combine forces and make great things :D
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iamli3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
think the noticeable breathing part might be over doing it a bit.....
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JuanBrony Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, i agree with you, im gonna be working on that in my next animations ;)
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